Final Paper

Nico Pozsar
Jill Darling
Writing 100
Hope in a Time of Hopelessness
            A great many people are not satisfied with the current state of affairs.  They are not only unhappy with their unfulfilling personal relationships, but also with the state and the world. I would argue this stems from a combination of a pervasive feeling of despair coupled with subsequent self-obsession. The proper solution to this is for we, as individuals, to try to work for something beyond themselves, and to put their personal needs subservient to those of others.
Since after World War 2 and the advent of consumerist America many people have lost hope as they have not only been unable to change the world, but unable to change themselves. Thus, they have tooken to therapy and the idea that one should “live for themselves”.  These ideas are perpetuated by many cultural icons such as Oprah (and her “Live the Life You Want” tour), as well as the enormously popular rapper Drake’s song The Motto, which includes the line “You only live once: that’s the motto” (Rap Genius). Though many people say the line in jest, many live their lives through this lens. They live through the Jeffersonian belief that Earth belongs to the living. As is also echoed in Cornel West’s Prisoners of Hope, and Tony Kushner’s Despair is a Lie We Tell Ourselves, the world is doomed politically as the power hungry elite horde their capabilities seeking only to ever preserve the status quo while millions remain hungry and oppressed. This idea of political despair coupled with the impending doom which awaits in the form of ecological disaster, global warming, or terrorism, and you create a group of people who believe there will be no future. Additionally, since we as a society have shaken the dust of that old conservative social order, and the future is doomed, it makes sense to focus on the self and to cultivate a “transcendental self-attention” (Lasch).
            Without hope, individuals can never hope to live their lives with any true sense of peace. If you hope for nothing, then why live? Even if it is for something as silly as some groomed 6 foot 4 athlete to catch a ball, or for a ball to go into a net, to hope for something makes life worth living at that moment. Herein lies the issue: “at that moment.” Sports can only provide hope in temporary doses, though the baseball season is 162 games. To forget oneself in favor of something more than the individual, something modern individuals have largely lost, lies lasting hope. In The Dark Years, Nelson Mandela writes how hope was the key to successfully changing the social order, not only in the big picture, but also in the current present (Mandela). Overall in the big picture, Mandela devoted himself to establishing greater equality in South Africa through various organizations which helped him to perpetuate his cause.  While in prison, his overarching hope helped him keep focus. Did he feel despair? Certainly. He probably believed he would be in prison for the rest of his life; however, cooperation with the other inmates to quietly convince guards that all they are looking for is justice and equality allowed him to maintain his posture and helped him get through the difficult time he spent while in prison (Mandela). Therefore, by working cooperatively he was able to learn how to free others, and therefore free himself.
            Reverend Desmond Tutu also expresses similar notions of hope in his No Future without Forgiveness. He also uses South Africa as an example of what can be achieved. He writes,
“God wants to point to us as a possible beacon of hope, a possible paradigm, and to say, ‘Look at South Africa. They had a nightmare called apartheid. It has ended. Northern Ireland (or wherever), your nightmare will end too. They had a problem regarded as intractable.  They are resolving it. No problem anywhere can ever again be considered to be intractable. There is hope for you too’ (Tutu).”
The example of South Africa is really quite moving. The nation is a dramatic example of what can change if you can learn to forgive and let the hatred flow out of you. Of all the hate filled nations on Earth, who could have possibly predicted the apartheid system in South Africa to come to an end peacefully? They still have issues to be sure, but by forgiving and embracing one another in their common humanity, they grew out of their inhuman oppression. By looking past their individual preferences and coming together through what they do have in common, they were able to peacefully shed the shackles of Apartheid and move towards the 21st century with relative unity.
King also expresses similar sentiments in his Letter from Birmingham Jail:
I hope the church as a whole will meet the challenge of this decisive hour. But even if the church does not come to the aid of justice, I have no despair about the future. I have no fear about the outcome of our struggle in Birmingham, even if our motives are at present misunderstood. We will reach the goal of freedom in Birmingham and all over the nation, because the goal of America is freedom (King)
King wrote this letter while in prison, as the title of the letter will tell you. The South was horribly racist at this time in history, and King probably knew one day he would be assassinated, but he still had hope. The same hope which allows him to say: “I have no despair about the future” (King), the same hope which caused him to not give up hope when publishing this letter, and the same hope when he marched on Washington and issued his famous “I have a Dream Speech” (Infoplease). This backbone of hope allowed him to continue his plight, even when change did not happen immediately, or when the movement faced various setbacks. However King was not alone in this movement. The Civil Rights Movement consisted of millions of people, without whose efforts, the entire movement would be in vain. By working together and cooperating, the American conscious became a great deal less racist in a matter of years.
            Though there are other examples beyond combatting racism in 20th century. Howard Zinn writes in his Optimism of Uncertainty of how, with the form of mass media we have now-a-days which is generally sensationalist, biased, lazy, and has a tendency for sensationalism and doom, how can I stay sane? He elaborates how the mass media will not report any one of thousands of small acts against the status quo each day: one has to actively search for those. He then cites a number of valid historical examples such as the women’s movement, the Civil Rights Movement, and the LGBTQ movement in the United States, all of which took place over decades based on millions of small decisions taken on by individuals who stood up for injustice.
            Another example of a small group who used determination and cooperation in the face of despair to achieve their aims were the Vietnamese leftists. They underwent a number of rebranding efforts and name changes as the movement changed over time, but their ideology and goals remained constant: they wanted a unified, socialist Vietnam. Viet Minh began as the umbrella organization for all the groups in “Indochina” at the time who fought in a number of wars for their independence.  The Viet Minh was largely dominated by the Vietnamese communist party and its two main leaders: Ho Chi Minh and party secretary Nguyen Van Linh. After unofficially forming in 1941 to protest French imperial rule (with simultaneous Japanese occupation), Western powers and other Asian powers attempted to squash them out of existence a number of times. After all, Vietnam, a poor, peasant filled, agrarian society, could not possibly retaliate against powers with far more guns, soldiers, power, and money than they, right? Wrong, as it turns out. Beginning in 1941, the Viet Minh fought against imperialist Japan in World War II alongside the allied forces, notably the United States on their Pacific front (Szczepanski). In 1945 Japan ousts the French government, famine hits, and Ho Chi Minh officially founds the Viet Minh who rise up against the French and Japanese (Szczepanski). After WWII, and subsequent Japanese defeat and expulsion, the West assumed France would again take control of South-East Asia (Szczepanski). The Viet Minh again revolted in what became known as the First Indochina war which lasted until the French were finally kicked out in 1954 with Vietnam losing 500,000 soldiers (Vietnam Gear).  Unfortunately, the West again declared at the Geneva Convention the independence of South Vietnam in 1954, and by 1959 Ho declared war and the Vietnam War begins (Szczepanski).  The most powerful nation on the planet at that time, the United States, with a global sphere of influence, declared war on a tiny agrarian society in the form of Vietnam which had had its independence for five years. The United States then conducted the most brutal bombing policy of a tiny peninsula ever (Zinn) and preceded to use Agent Orange to attempt to starve the Viet Cong, as well as the rest of the people in North Vietnam. Still the Vietnamese would not give up. By the end of the war, the National Liberation Front (the most recent evolution of Marxism in Vietnam) had suffered nearly 1.1 million casualties (Agence France Presse). According to the United States Department of Veteran Affairs, the US lost approximately 58,000 soldiers (US Department of Veteran Affairs). This means that the Vietnamese leftists lost nearly 19 soldiers for every one US soldier, and they still won.  Americans often resent this fact, it was more of a draw. No it was not, the US pulled out and the puppet state was promptly conquered. The Vietnamese socialists, though underwent some name changes, fought near continuously for 30 years, lost 1.5 million soldiers, first for their independence and then for their unity. This is an example to where if people can devote themselves to the group, and through their sheer force of will and determination they were able to achieve their goal of creating an independent, socialist Vietnam.    
            A personal example of mine was my Junior year. Some background first, the Junior grades for American students applying to colleges are enormously important and I took this to heart. For the entirety of my Junior year, upon returning to Northville, MI after living abroad in Germany, I dedicated myself entirely to my school work, largely per my father’s instruction. You work hard in high school, you get into a good college, you get a job, and you get to live a nice bourgeoisie future. Not going to college was not an option, it is just something that you do so you can get a job. At the end of my junior year, I completed a number of AP exams, took an ACT prep course, and saw my initial score raised by five points. I had done everything I had achieved: everything I could possibly hope for, and yet I still felt a vague discontent. After the first day of summer I merely shrugged, so what? So what, I did these things. Nothing had changed. The world was still dying around me. The grades grew to mean nothing to me, and in my eyes they became symbolic of my futile efforts. Yes, I had good grades, but at what cost? I hated every second of my junior year and largely shunned social activity in favor of studying more for some AP class, or getting in another science section of the ACT. I had let my frivolous ambition cloud my judgment. What matters in life? That I can get a good grade on a test, or that I could help others? That I could memorize the 24 variation of question that are posed on the SAT math question and how to tackle each of them? Remember, if you see the words “in terms of”, first plug in the answer A and then E, which are statistically most likely to be the correct answer, etc etc... However, since then I have found something far more gratifying. Recently, I have begun to tutor English to non-native speakers through my church. For me, helping someone develop a language that will greatly help them in their everyday lives. Helping individuals made me happier for far longer than getting good grades did. But without good grades you wouldn’t have gotten into Michigan. This, I recognize. It was necessary for me to study and work hard, it still is, but what I devote my life to, how I frame the decisions I make, and how I spend my time while not working is what makes me truly happy.
            People need two things in their lives to find fulfilment. They need love and some meaning. How does one find these things? I’m not asking everyone to drop what they are passionate about in favor of life working full time at a soup kitchen. A great way to start, is to look beyond yourself and ask: how can I help someone else today? Individuals make millions upon millions of choices each day, and by choosing to help others for a small fraction of those choices, the world will slowly change for the better.

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Final reflection:
First I’ll mention a little bit of what I thought I did well. I think the argument was supported well with both historical examples in the form of Vietnam, as well as a more recent example of the Civil Rights Movement with Martin Luther King Jr, as well as the end of Apartheid in South Africa.


Unfortunately, the rest of the paper does not exactly match the first two paragraphs. The first paragraph lays out how people aren’t happy, and how this is due to a combination of a pervasive feeling of despair coupled with narcissism. I argue the proper solution is for people to devote themselves to something beyond themselves, and to put their personal needs subservient to those of others. Then in the second paragraph I talk about how people are selfish. Then the topic sort of evolves just from saying that everyone’s selfish to talking about the impossibility of living life without hope, I use Mandela as an example. So, in that sense, the paper doesn’t flow strictly that well from the thesis. The claim sort of evolves as it goes down with a sort of central idea of hope. Unfortunately, my personal reflection paragraph (within the paper, not this) does not have anything to do with hope, which sort of just features my beliefs on how one should live their life. So, the paper isn’t conventional as it doesn’t directly flow from the thesis, but rather slowly evolves. The idea evolves over time, which make the essay feel scatterbrained. 

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